Friday Fictioneer

Friday Fictioneers! One hundred words based on this wonderful picture. Thanks once more to Rochelle for leading us in our flash fiction adventures. Enjoy 🙂

PHOTO PROMPT © Erin Leary

She angled the camera to catch the light limning the burgundy tips, taking a step deeper into the water. Water sloshed over her boots and lily pads tangled around her legs. Andrea ignored the discomfort.

She needed the perfect submission this semester. Only the top three photos got in. Even when something grasped her ankle, Andrea continued snapping. But a tug made her pause, then alarm filled her as her leg was pulled sharply to the side.

Before she could scream, the water roiled and Jeff stood up, snorting water as he laughed.

“Oh, man….your face! That’s gonna be my pic!”

 

 

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11 responses to “Friday Fictioneer

  1. I trust she got her revenge.

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  2. Dear Samantha,

    That’s was pretty down and dirty of Jeff but I’m betting it’s going to be a great picture if it didn’t blur. Good one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. LOL! He’s a really sneaky guy!

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  4. Great twist. I hope she gets her revenge with an even better picture of his discomfort 😉

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  5. Oh no, and he’ll probably beat her with that entry. Fun story.

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  6. Ha! That was a good setup – the perfect scene, perfect concentration and perseverance even when she’s ‘snagged’. Loved the ending.

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  7. Jeff is terrible! Great story. 😄

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